Recordings - Revision history

ValterAlves at 23:57, 24 August 2012

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 | ex5=<mt p="Recordings" g="Dead to Rights" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}"></mt>
 | ex6=<mt p="Recordings" g="Heavy Rain" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">A handwritten note, introducing new elements in the [[Narrative]], which is read out aloud using the voice of the character who wrote it.</mt>
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 | examples=
-| ex1=<mt p="Recordings" g="Bioshock" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Individual testimonies, in the form of personal audio diaries, offer different perspectives of life in the advent of the situation in stake.</mt>
+| ex1=<mt p="Recordings" g="Bioshock" altg="BioShock" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Individual testimonies, in the form of personal audio diaries, offer different perspectives of life in the advent of the situation in stake.</mt>
 | ex2=<mt p="Recordings" g="Infamous" altg="InFamous" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Communications, in the form of collectible "dead drops", explain the events that led to the state of the game world as it is.</mt>
 | ex3=<mt p="Recordings" g="Silent Hill Homecoming" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">An accidental recording that captured a moment, that contributes to the [[Narrative]]. The tape and the recorder were found in different locations.</mt>

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 | examples=
 | ex1=<mt p="Recordings" g="Bioshock" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Individual testimonies, in the form of personal audio diaries, offer different perspectives of life in the advent of the situation in stake.</mt>
-| ex2=<mt p="Recordings" g="Infamous" altg="InFamous" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Communications, in the form of collectible "dead drops", explain the events that lead to the state of the game world as it is.</mt>
+| ex2=<mt p="Recordings" g="Infamous" altg="InFamous" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Communications, in the form of collectible "dead drops", explain the events that led to the state of the game world as it is.</mt>
 | ex3=<mt p="Recordings" g="Silent Hill Homecoming" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">An accidental recording that captured a moment, that contributes to the [[Narrative]]. The tape and the recorder were found in different locations.</mt>
 | ex4=<mt p="Recordings" g="Far Cry 2" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Collectible pieces of interviews that help to know the main NPC.</mt>

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 | ex1=<mt p="Recordings" g="Bioshock" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Individual testimonies, in the form of personal audio diaries, offer different perspectives of life in the advent of the situation in stake.</mt>
 | ex2=<mt p="Recordings" g="Infamous" altg="InFamous" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Communications, in the form of collectible "dead drops", explain the events that lead to the state of the game world as it is.</mt>
-| ex3=<mt p="Recordings" g="Silent Hill Homecoming" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">An accidental recording that captured a moment, that contributes to the [[Narrative]]. The tape and the player are found in different places.</mt>
+| ex3=<mt p="Recordings" g="Silent Hill Homecoming" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">An accidental recording that captured a moment, that contributes to the [[Narrative]]. The tape and the recorder were found in different locations.</mt>
 | ex4=<mt p="Recordings" g="Far Cry 2" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Collectible pieces of interviews that help to know the main NPC.</mt>
 | ex5=<mt p="Recordings" g="Dead to Rights" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}"></mt>
 | ex6=<mt p="Recordings" g="Heavy Rain" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">A handwritten note, introducing new elements in the [[Narrative]], which is read out aloud using the voice of the character who wrote it.</mt>
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 | ex4=<mt p="Recordings" g="Far Cry 2" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">Collectible pieces of interviews that help to know the main NPC.</mt>
 | ex5=<mt p="Recordings" g="Dead to Rights" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}"></mt>
-| ex6=<mt p="Recordings" g="Heavy Rain" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">A hand written note, introducing new elements in the [[Narrative]], which is read out aloud using the voiced of the character who wrote it.</mt>
+| ex6=<mt p="Recordings" g="Heavy Rain" w="{{R16by9W}}" h="{{R16by9H}}">A handwritten note, introducing new elements in the [[Narrative]], which is read out aloud using the voice of the character who wrote it.</mt>
 }}

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 | revisions =Introduced in version 1.0 as [[Audio Logs]]
 | description =
-[[Recordings]] offer pieces of [[Narrative]] that in the format of recorded [[Dialogue]].
+[[Recordings]] offer pieces of [[Narrative]] in the format of recorded [[Dialogue]].
 It is fairly common that [[Recordings]] are found as collectibles scattered through the game world, though isolated cases are also common.

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 | deckversion =1.0
 | v10synopsis =Dialogue recordings, frequently scattered through the gameworld
-| v20synopsis =Recorded dialogue, frequently scattered through the gameworld
+| v20synopsis =Recorded dialogue, frequently scattered through the game world
 | patternpresentation =
 | cardpresentation=
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 [[Recordings]] offer pieces of [[Narrative]] that in the format of recorded [[Dialogue]].
-It is fairly common that [[Recordings]] are found as collectibles scattered through the gameworld, though isolated cases are also common.
+It is fairly common that [[Recordings]] are found as collectibles scattered through the game world, though isolated cases are also common.
 Some explorations, such as hand written tickets that are read when found, are somehow semantically comparable.

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 | v20rel-tag4=Makes use of:<br>
 | v20rel4=[[Dialogue]]<br>
-| revisions =Introduced in version 1.0 as [[Audio-Logs]]
+| revisions =Introduced in version 1.0 as [[Audio Logs]]
 | description =
 [[Recordings]] offer pieces of [[Narrative]] that in the format of recorded [[Dialogue]].